Questions

From Housegirl Haley’s blog, if it’s hers and I’ve stolen it I’ll take it down

It happened as I remembered.

But from a different angle.

“Do I really look that old?”

She – I – nodded.

“Shall we begin, comrade?” The interrogation had begun.

I remember.

This doesn’t end well.

Written for this weekend’s Trifextra Writing Challenge, which was to write a 33 word time-travel story. 

Let me know what you think! 

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17 thoughts on “Questions

  1. Dystopia never seems to get old 😉

  2. I like the 2 ‘yous’ in your piece, time overlapping and the all-knowing ending. Thanks for linking up!

  3. KymmInBarcelona says:

    The question ‘do I really look that old?’ never ends well, either. lol

  4. Emily Kathleen says:

    Great story! I love what you did with this.

  5. Draug419 says:

    That last line is great.

  6. deanabo says:

    To go back is one thing, but to go back and watch yourself would just scare me! Very good post.

  7. grace black says:

    Great entry. Always enjoy your words!

  8. What a mindbender! Very clever take on the prompt.

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