It stood above us – gaunt, sinister, grey. The cold stone tower: oppression.
It took an age, but our vengeance was quenched – a stone finger erected toward London.
Now we’ve a tower, trapping tourists.
A 33 word story written for Trifextra this weekend, who challenged us to write a story in which we were challenged to “Give us 33 words (exactly) that tell us three different uses for one object. But don’t just tell us that a can opener can be used to 1) open cans, 2) open beer bottles and 3) break a window in case of a fire.” I think I accomplished that, what do you think?
I also managed to sneak in one of the BeKindRewrite prompts: I’ve got a tower, kind of…
Comments and criticism always welcome!
Clever take on the prompt. I love the finger pointing toward London!
Poor trapped tourist in their … tourist trap! ha! Cute.
I love the use of “stone finger” as an illustration. well done.
I imagined that it was the middle finger, absolutely.
I love the phrase, our vengeance was quenched. Thanks for linking up with us again this week. Please come on back tomorrow for the new challenge.
Wow! You managed to put quite a lot into just 33 words!
Excellent!
Anna :o] at http://puzzelicious.blogspot.com
Nice. Had to read it a couple of times. Quite clever.
Thirty three good words.