Little Fellow

“Excuse me, son…lost your mother?”
I felt his hand on my shoulder before I could respond.
“Piss off!” was my reply.
He looked taken aback. Flabbergasted.
Hasn’t he seen a dwarf before?

Another Trifextra 33 word story, using the prompt Mother.


9 thoughts on “Little Fellow

  1. Just saw an episode of 30 Rock where Liz makes this mistake. Ever seen it? Nice take on the prompt.

  2. karen says:

    I chuckled. Very funny.

  3. barbara says:

    hahahaha – ahem, poor guy.

  4. TikkTok says:

    What? Don’t dwarfs have mothers? 😉

  5. Isn’t it great what people assume? I presume this idiot saw your character from the rear and wasn’t intelligent enough to walk around front.

  6. jannatwrites says:

    I didn’t expect that ending! I thought the “kid’s” reply was rude, but by the last line, I laughed 🙂

  7. Haha, excellent. Great twist at the end. Thanks for linking up.

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