From Love, Indifference Grows

She disagreed heartily and privately, staring passed his head and out the window behind him. Staring out into her past, at the ghosts of her dreams – of what could’ve been, of what should’ve been. Emphatically ignoring him, though he would never had noticed, the wheezing, rutting ape.

A quick thirty three words forTrifecta using that first sentence. I started writing something else – but it’s now 260 words and counting, so it will end up a touch too long for the guys at Trifecta. They would have loved it, though, it has exclamation marks as well as the third definition of vulgar (both earlier Trifecta Challenges.)


7 thoughts on “From Love, Indifference Grows

  1. jesterqueen says:

    Maybe you can do what Karen did this week and make your weekday post the longer version of your weekend one!

  2. Amelia says:

    Oh I can tell I don’t like him.

  3. Oh, he’s a yucky, sweaty groper it sounds like.

  4. karen says:

    I’m with Amelia on this one. He’s not nice.

    And then I’m with Jesse, make your next weekday post that one with a well-placed (or not!) exclamation point and the extra word! You know, if the new word fits it …

    Anyhoo … the hate in this piece is pretty visceral. Wow.

  5. Thanks so much for linking up to Trifextra. Remember, this weekend’s entries are being judged by the Trifecta community, so I hope you were able to cast your votes. Winners will be announced with the Monday post. Hope to see you back then.

  6. Gina says:

    I can feel her loathing of him through your simple words.

  7. louisesor says:

    That is some world class disdain! Woh!

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