It’s complicated…

So this is a 420 character story…that’s the maximum length of a status update on Facebook, for those of you playing at home. Here we go hope you enjoy it…

There it was again, the desperate knocking on the door. He sat watching the shadows, straining to make out the muffled whispers.

“He’s always been a quiet one,” his neighbour; he recognised her voice as the one shouting accusations of infidelity behind his wall. A constant stream of former lovers. They never spoke in two years of shared elevator silence.

It was the super who opened the door. He stood, apologetic. It was nice to know she cared, to see her there. He met her eyes.

“Hi, I’m Chris…”

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