Pull me closer

Three sentences!


She had danced with me, now she danced with him.

I could never have had her, never could hold her, not how I wanted to.

She was with him now, and I was out of cash; so I left the strip-club.

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3 thoughts on “Pull me closer

  1. […] Pull me closer Voice Week 2011 […]

  2. fun word play, wow.

    love your blog,

    come join our poetry picnic week 9 today,
    first time participants can share 1 to 3 random poems.

    Old poems or poems unrelated to our theme are welcome.

    Hope to see you in.


    • Hey thanks, I haven’t written much poetry in the last few years. Not since I lost my giant notebook that I filled with songs. May drop on over and have a read, though, I have written some prose poetry (whatever that means) here it is

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